Banning milk at Awapuni School

We were learning about writing a story about banning milk at Awapuni school.

I found it easy to write all of my statements in my piece of writing.

I found it challenging to write the rest of my writing because I just think about other things like how I could have improved my writing instead of actually write my writing.

Next time I will Improve my writing by making my paragraphs have more sentences, write in full sentences and just a bit more punctuation.