In my writing class we have been working on creating our own piece of writing about our favourite place to be. Personally my favourite place to be is probably Morere Rockslide. Because there is a bombing spot and a huge rockslide, and also you will have lots of fun. It was extremely fun for me because I had seen some of my mates from school and It was excellent. It was a really great time seeing them I hope I could go there again sometime.
I really found my work easy because I could remember lots of what my friends and I had done on the day. I tried to add as much personification as I could and use the most descriptive words I could think of. Today I pushed myself and wrote down four paragraphs.
There were not many things I found challenging but only probably a few problems. I did kind of struggle with writing four paragraphs in the amount of time but I did it so maybe I can achieve that again the next writing session.
Next time maybe I can put more punctuation and descriptive words in my writing and more descriptive language. I am still learning to put more rich words and less lazy words. I will try and strive for better writing and a bigger improvement.
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