Swimming In The Rain

 

We were learning about creating a piece of writing  about a moment in time such as writing about something we did in the past or about a story that we can properly remember.

I found it easy to use mote and create the audio as a welcome and introduction. I also found it easy to think of words from the top of my head as well as thinking of descriptive words to put in my writing.

I found it quite challenging to remember more about the writing because it was quite a while ago.  I found it hard to think of all of the things that we did in the pool at that time.

Next time I will create more of a descriptive story with more detail and more rich words, also with full sentences and all my correct punctuation.

Horouta Waka Animation

 

We were learning the story called Horouta. So today I have created my own animation about the Horouta story.

I found it easy to duplicate my slides and add a bit more detail into each slide I had created. I also found it really easy to use the polyline tool to create my mountains and everything else that was created on my slides.

I found it challenging to think of my favourite part of the story because the whole story was just really amazing and I also found it hard to add the people but later on found it.

Next time I will maybe make it more longer and put lots of more detail then it has.

Triathlon

 

We were learning about writing a recount about our Triathlon Day.

I found it easy to write about it and write down lots of information because I could remember most of the activities that we did and also because there was lots of stuff that we had been doing on the day such as Individual race, Team race and cheering on all of our friends but mostly everybody.

I found it challenging to write about the race because that was like the only thing that I didn't remember but I instantly brought it back into my mind within seconds.

Next time I will try write with more rich words, have the right tense always, full sentences and try to remember to write down lots more detail.