We were learning about writing a recount about our Triathlon Day.
I found it easy to write about it and write down lots of information because I could remember most of the activities that we did and also because there was lots of stuff that we had been doing on the day such as Individual race, Team race and cheering on all of our friends but mostly everybody.
I found it challenging to write about the race because that was like the only thing that I didn't remember but I instantly brought it back into my mind within seconds.
Next time I will try write with more rich words, have the right tense always, full sentences and try to remember to write down lots more detail.
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