Tuesday, April 13, 2021

Swimming In The Rain

 
We were learning about creating a piece of writing  about a moment in time such as writing about something we did in the past or about a story that we can properly remember.


I found it easy to use mote and create the audio as a welcome and introduction. I also found it easy to think of words from the top of my head as well as thinking of descriptive words to put in my writing.


I found it quite challenging to remember more about the writing because it was quite a while ago.  I found it hard to think of all of the things that we did in the pool at that time.

Next time I will create more of a descriptive story with more detail and more rich words, also with full sentences and all my correct punctuation.

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  1. AnonymousApril 15, 2021 at 9:49 AM

    Hi my name is Tilly I really like your writing because you have a lot of emotive words that describe how most people felt. I liked the part when you said that you dive into the pool excitedly. maybe next time you could put each paragraph onto a different slide I also really liked how long and descriptive your stems were

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  2. AnonymousJune 2, 2021 at 9:45 AM

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